Grading for sample 3
First, I did not find a clear thesis statement for the whole paper.
And it kinds of combine the Analysis of Lit Features and Performance together because when the writer wrote the Analysis part, the writer mentioned "audiences"

Analysis of Lit Features: 3 (too long and redundant)
the writer did not analyze the lit Features deeply and too much summary

Performance: 5
the writer used "I decided to end the scene" which is the director's language
Talked too little about the writer's own performance.

Language: 3
confused